The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.
The diagram illustrates the figures of
men
and women
enrolled in the Computer Science program
at a tertiary institution in the UK from 2010 to 2012.
Overall
it is immediately apparent over the years that, the number of British
natives who studied the course out numbered
the international students.
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outnumbered
To begin
with, in 2010 there were more males than females reading the subject whether British
natives or foreign students. By contrast
, 2011 observed an increase in the number of British
women
pursuing the program
at nearly 45, whereas
the figure for men
fell to nearly 25. Also
, in the same year, more men
and women
from the international category were on
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in
program
at 23 and 18 respectively.
However
, in 2012 nearly 45 British
men
were enrolled whilst close to 40 foreign men
were on the course. For the women
, although
45 British
women
studied the subject, less than half this
figure at 20 female foreign students were on the program
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