The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.

The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.
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The diagram illustrates the figures of
men
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and
women
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enrolled in the Computer Science
program
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at a tertiary institution in the UK from 2010 to 2012.
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it is immediately apparent over the years that, the number of
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natives who studied the course
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the international students.
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with, in 2010 there were more males than females reading the subject whether
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natives or foreign students.
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, 2011 observed an increase in the number of
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women
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pursuing the
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at nearly 45,
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the figure for
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fell to nearly 25.
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, in the same year, more
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and
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from the international category were
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the
program
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at 23 and 18 respectively.
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, in 2012 nearly 45
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men
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were enrolled whilst close to 40 foreign
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were on the course. For the
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,
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45
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women
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studied the subject, less than half
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figure at 20 female foreign students were on the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, program, british with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • number
  • students
  • Computer Science
  • UK university
  • increased consistently
  • significant rise
  • recorded
  • enrolled
  • attributed to
  • growing demand
  • professionals
  • job market
  • popularity
  • technology-related fields
  • inferred
  • subject
  • gaining prominence
  • steady growth
  • positive trend
  • field
  • portrays
  • importance
  • technological advancements
  • society
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