The table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above illustrates the proportion of products sold and popular item prices in three different restaurants. It's clear that different cafes shown have divergent popular
menu
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and prices. The highest transaction is on Georgia Street, whilst the lowest is in Vancouver Drake, and in between there is Vancouver Dunsmuir.
Overall
, people show more interest in chicken
burger
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, which proves that it has sold more than 800 pieces on Georgia Street.
Although
it costs the highest price at $10.69, everyone
still
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willing to
purchase
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.
On the other hand
, pasta is the least favourite
amongst
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all, even though it costs $9.02. Drake Street only reach 390
at the end
of the day and 200 individuals that go there choose dine-in. Chicken wings score differs a bit compared to burger. They make it to 750 transactions and the reason behind
this
,
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is simply because they are the cheapest menu at only $5.61.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The table provides data on
  • average time spent
  • fast-food restaurants
  • diners
  • cafés
  • fine dining establishments
  • average cost per person
  • dining experience
  • comparisons
  • relevant
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