The table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above illustrates the proportion of products sold and popular item prices in three different restaurants.
It's clear that different cafes shown have divergent popular
menu
and prices. The highest transaction is on Georgia Street, whilst the lowest is in Vancouver Drake, and in between there is Vancouver Dunsmuir.
Fix the agreement mistake
menus
Overall
, people show more interest in chicken burger
, which proves that it has sold more than 800 pieces on Georgia Street. Fix the agreement mistake
burgers
Although
it costs the highest price at $10.69, everyone still
willing to Add a missing verb
is still
purchase
. Correct pronoun usage
itpurchase
On the other hand
, pasta is the least favourite amongst
all, even though it costs $9.02. Drake Street only reach 390 Change preposition
of
at the end
of the day and 200 individuals that go there choose dine-in.
Chicken wings score differs a bit compared to burger. They make it to 750 transactions and the reason behind this
,
is simply because they are the cheapest menu at only $5.61.Remove the comma
apply
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