The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The provided charts compare the consumption of three nutrients in standard meals for the average individual per day in the USA.
Overall
, the most nutritious meal an individual has during
dinner time, Add a missing verb
is during
whereas
breakfast
includes the least amount of nutrients. Additionally
, snacks are the least healthy type of food as it
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To begin
, 43% of sodium is consumed by a person at dinner, accounting for the highest number in the chart. On the other hand
, both snacks and breakfast
have a proportion of 14% for the same nutrient. 26% of saturated fat is taken during lunch, which is 3% less of sodium, at 29%. Also
, lunch contains 19% of added sugar, which is slighly
higher than for Correct your spelling
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breakfast
, at 16%. Interestingly, breakfast
contains only 16% of sugar and saturated fat, followed by 14% of sodium. Hence
, breakfast
can be considered the healthiest meal of the day.Submitted by innakireeva0101 on
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