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n some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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The US has declared a curfew in certain areas, especially for adolescents.
Therefore
 they won't be able to go out without a guardian after a particular time of night.
This
 decision is quite suitable in my view as criminals and illegal attempts are increasing.
Firstly
, in the US crimes
such
 as murders, and child abuse
are highly
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 increased than past. Some areas are extremely dangerous and annual records of missing teenagers have
been
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increased by 11% in 2020. Most teenagers are engaging in activities
such
 as alcohol intake, starting sexual activities at a young age etc. Even though adults always
advice
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 them,
due to
 the normal hormonal changes during the adolescent period it is difficult to control them. Not only that childhood addiction to liquor and
cigarette
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a highly pathetic situation but
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unexpected pregnancies at a small age and the risk of getting sexually transmitted diseases are other major problems that can occur
due to
 the unaware behaviours of children.
Secondly
, even if it should be ceased by authorities it is not easy to do so. Governments have to protect them by cork or by kook. Unless it will be a plot in the near future all over the country. Even though it is too expensive to
settele
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settle
 payments for security field, the US government declared a curfew on behalf of
teenagers
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 safety.
To sum up
, as the
criminals
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 and illegal things
increasing
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 the US imposed a curfew on several criteria. I strongly believe it is a good decision to protect the future strength of the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • curfew
  • imposed
  • teenagers
  • out of doors
  • accompanied by
  • adult
  • safety
  • criminal activities
  • harmful situations
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • family bonding
  • time-management skills
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