All parents want best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future.

School

is considered as

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one of the best places for

children

for their harmonious development. Some

parents

think that educational

institutions

must start teaching

children

skills

,

however

, others opine that academic

institute

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should concentrate on

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range

of

subjects

for the development of

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in the long run. In my opinion,

school

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should allocate proper time

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integrating a

range

of

subjects

for

children

.

Parents

are always looking for golden opportunities for their

children

.

Parents

think that it is the responsibility of the

institutions

to teach characteristics and

skills

to their

children

.

For instance

, academic

institutions

not only teach about particular

subjects

but

also

focus on some

children

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skills

as well

such

as honesty, time management

skills

,

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communications

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skills

to the students. Contrarily, other

parents

have the opinion that academic

institutions

should only focus on integrating different

kind

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of

subjects

for a

child

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development.

For instance

, art, literature, mechanics, disability,

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management

course

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fall in the category of

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range

of

subjects

which can help a child

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grow more effectively and create better employment opportunities for

children

.

Secondly

,

parents

also

share that

children

’s

skills

can be taught by our grandparents as well. Grandparents are

also

a good source of teaching

skills

to their grandchildren. In conclusion, people think that

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should start giving classes on

children

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skills

, but In my point of view,

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the school

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school

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can integrate

range

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of

subjects

for

children

which can assist them to become

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responsible

member

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society.