Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment . What can the government do to address the problem ? What can individual people do ?

Human beings
had
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destroyed the environment for several centuries which
cause
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the sickness
of
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Earth
. Different
authority
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around the world in the past decades
are
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figuring out ways to mitigate and adapt to
the
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problems
such
as climate change, rising
of
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sea
level
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and the increase in extreme weather. Human activities emit large
amount
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of
greenhouse
gases from industrial activities, agriculture and urbanisation. The massive emission of
greenhouse
gases
lead
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to the intensification of
greenhouse
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effect
as a result
speeding up global warming. The ozone layer of the south pole on
Earth
is damaged which causes
sun
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to penetrate directly into
Earth
's surface. The fast surge in
Earth
's temperature causes the extinction of polar animals, melting of sea ice and ocean acidification. The marine ecosystem is especially badly impacted. To cope with the demand for urban development around the world, countries urbanise their territory rapidly. Owing to the lack of sufficient flatland in some cities, reclamation or
leveling
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hills become a common way to increase land supply.
However
, reclamation and
leveling
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of hills create irreversible water and soil pollution. Animals lose their habitats and
in particular
cases, they become
endanged
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endangered
entangled
or
extincted
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extinct
. To address the lists of destruction caused by
human
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humans
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, different authorities cooperate to deal with the problems. The introduction of the carbon market
create
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a win-win system for countries to limit their carbon footprint. The Paris
agreement
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signed by over a hundred communities set up new emission goals. Locally, some governments adopt the use of electric cars and use less polluting fuel. More renewable energy is used
instead
of the traditional dirty coal fuel. Individually, we can begin with our daily practices.
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public transport
instead
of driving a car can reduce the emission of
greenhouse
gases. We can
also
save electricity and water by
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a bath with a quick shower.
Overall
,
human
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humans
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made
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much damage to the
Earth
and we should find ways to solve or alleviate the problems brought by the
destructions
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. Saving the
Earth
isn't the responsibility of a small group of people, but it needs the contribution of the entire world community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity loss
  • air pollution
  • climate change
  • water pollution
  • water scarcity
  • waste generation
  • improper disposal
  • overconsumption
  • resource depletion
  • government regulation
  • enforcement
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable practices
  • environmental regulations
  • environmental fines
  • education
  • awareness campaigns
  • individual responsibility
  • reduce
  • reuse
  • recycle
  • conserve
  • public transportation
  • carpooling
  • eco-friendly businesses
  • advocate
  • collaboration
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