The pie chart below shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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pie chart
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different languages
Canada
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2006
2016
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majority
minority
significant
notable
significant
share
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The pie chart below shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016.

In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue can be solved?

You are going abroad on holiday and your friend will stay in your home while you are away. Write a letter to your friend, in your letter - explain where you hide the keys - describe what your friend needs to do in your absent - say when you are coming back

The cost of living is higher in many countries. What are the effects of higher prices on individuals and society? What is the best way for people to deal with this problem?

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages fo this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?