Modern children are suffering from diseases that were once considered only meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?
At
this
time, children
are suffering from diseases that used to be adult illnesses. One of the most diseases
is Correct word choice
common diseases
obesity
which attacks
Verb problem
affects
children
. In this
essay, I will explain more about the causes and the solutions to this
problem.
Firstly
, children
are
like to eat more ultra-processed Unnecessary verb
apply
foods
. It includes junk food that have
been growing in recent years and Change the verb form
has
easy
to find. Most Add a missing verb
is easy
children
like to consume ultra-processed foods
because of its
taste and simplicity. The lack of knowledge about Correct pronoun usage
their
this
effect on health
issues also
make
them consume it daily. Change the verb form
makes
Moreover
, this
condition causes an unhealthy lifestyle and affect
their Correct subject-verb agreement
affects
health
into
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to
obesity
. For instance
, a survey by World
Correct article usage
the World
Health
Organization shows that 65% of people with
Change preposition
people's
obesity
are
caused by the consumption of ultra-processed Correct subject-verb agreement
is
foods
.
However
, there are several solutions we can adopt to prevent obesity
in children
. First of all, parents should make rules about what their child consume such
as the limitation to eat
junk food or other ultra-processed Wrong verb form
eating
foods
. Parents can also
educate their children
to eat healthy food and make this
as
habit in their daily life Correct your spelling
a
hence
it can lead to a healthy lifestyle. Furthermore
, with support from parents, children
will be happier to take this
action.
In conclusion, health
problems especially obesity
has
a big impact Wrong verb form
have had
in
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on
children
’s life
recently and even in the future. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
It’s not only affect
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It does not only affect
health
issues but also
other aspects of life. Nevertheless
, if people can take action to prevent this
problem, they still have a chance to reduce obesity
among children
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