The graph below shows the types of transport used by tourists who visited New Zealand from five countries in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the types of transport used by tourists who visited New Zealand from five countries in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the percentage of sightseers from Britain, Germany, Japan, Korea and Australia who used different modes of
transport
,
such
as air,
coach
,
car
and ferry when they visited New
Zealand
in the year 2004.
Overall
, most of the people in the given countries had chosen cars as their way of
transport
except the
Japanese
.
Moreover
,
British
, Germans and Australians had their highest and lowest used mode of transportation as
car
and
coach
respectively. First and Foremost, 60% of
British
tourists
and approximately 52, 50 and 45% of
German
, Korean and Australian
tourists
used the
car
to visit various places in New
Zealand
. The lowest percentage of
Japanese
tourists
(25%) used a
car
to travel around New
Zealand
. The
tourists
from Japan were the most fond of air travel. Roughly 55% of
Japanese
tourists
used
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airways to travel within New
Zealand
. Air
transport
was used by 35%
British
, 30% Korean and 25%
German
tourists
.
In contrast
, only 11% of Australians used airways. A similar proportion (20%) of
British
and
German
tourists
used the
coach
,
while
the percentage of Koreans using the
coach
was almost double (40%) than that of the
British
and Germans. The
coach
was used the most (52%) by the
Japanese
tourists
,
whereas
the least Australian
visitor
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(8%) used the
coach
. Nearly 48% of
German
traveler
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travelers
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and 35% of
British
sightseer
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sightseers
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used the ferry. Of the
tourists
from Japan, Korea and Australia less than 15% in each case, used the ferry as a means of
transport
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, coach, car, zealand, japanese, british, tourists, german with synonyms.
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