The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
The charts depict the typical temperature (in degrees Celsius) and how much it rains each month in a specific area in East Africa.
Overall
, it is seen that the rainy weather occurs mainly in April, whereas
the highest temperatures are in March and October.There is little to no rainfall in the summer
, September, January and February, ,
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similarly
the coldest period is also
summer
.
According to
the bar chart, rain is uncommon during the last
two months of winter (approximately 15 millimetres
) and in the summer
(less than 10 millimetres
) . As opposed to the temperature, which is from 21.5 to 23.5 degrees Celsius during winter and 20.5 to 21 during summer
. Rain is seen regularly in April, which constitutes the highest point of nearly 300 millimetres
and the weather is moderate roughly 23.5 degrees and is the same in October.
However
, rain frequency is often in October and November (around 150 millimetres
), whereas
it accounts for about 25 millimetres
in September. From the beginning of
,Autumn it starts to get warmer in the East of Africa, Change preposition
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although
it decreases as the Winter comes.Submitted by belchicovaa on
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