The pie chart below shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016.

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The pie chart represents how many

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percentages

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of native speakers of

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different

diferent

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different languages

lenguages

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languages

lived in

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Canada

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canada

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in 1996, 2006 and 2016

Overall

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it is clear that

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in 1980

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english

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by 70

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percentages

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of all native speakers. The second place takes

Urdu

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the Urdu

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language with 15

persentage

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percentage

Not

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big differences

betewen

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between

Urdu and Chinese languages. Some significant changes

represents

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pie

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the pie

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chart in 1990. English

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percentages

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decreased to 55 % meanwhile

other

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the other

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lenguages

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languages

speaking humans number was the same as in 1980.

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of people who have Urdu

lenguages

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languages

language

as a native

speach

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speech

was higher by 13

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percentages

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comperisson wiht

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comparison with

1980

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years.

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Chinese

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increased by 2

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percentages

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in general both pie charts it is seen that 15 %

increased

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native

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speaker

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in Canada.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words persentages with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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3
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

128 words

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The pie chart below shows the number of native speakers of different languages in canada in 1996, 2006 and 2016.

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid any change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. discuss both views and give your opinion.

: It is important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?