The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart highlights the proportion of people who used the internet in four different age brackets in three consecutive years spanning from 1998 to 2000.
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the highest proportion of internet users belonged to the age group of
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, the lowest of these rates were related to the less-than-15-year-old. In 1998, people
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aged 16 to 30 had the largest
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of users and the percentage they accounted for reached a peak of nearly 55% over
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period,
then
the figure gradually decreased to less than 45% by 2000.
Additionally
, the number of 31-50-year-olds who had the second highest percentage of internet users, fell slightly from about 40% to around 35%.
On the other hand
, the age categories of less than 15 and 50 or more stood at the bottom of the graph over the measured period and started at about 1% and 5% respectively in 1998.
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, both rose gently to about 8% from 1998 to 1999 and
then
remained stable at about 10%
at the end
of the period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational setting
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • nursery school
  • higher education
  • proportion
  • outnumber
  • trend
  • comparison
  • historical factors
  • social influence
  • teaching profession
  • data interpretation
  • balance
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