The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. »

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. »
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The chart depicts the expenditure used on six consumer goods
such
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as Photographic
films
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,
toys
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, CDs, perfumes,
tennis
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racquets
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and personal stereos in four countries, namely Britain, France, Italy and Germany.
Overall
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, Britishers spent more on all the
good
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compared to other nations. Britishers spent more money(170) on photographic
films
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, followed by
toys
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(around 167) and they spent
least
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the least
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money on
tennis
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racquets
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and personal
steroes
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stereos
for
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155.
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, Italy has allocated an equivalent amount for the purchase of photographic
films
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, perfumes and
tennis
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racquets
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,
totaling
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150, marking the highest expenditure by Italians. French individuals ranked in terms of expenditure on photographic
films
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,
toys
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and
CD's
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CDs
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with
amount
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amounts
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of 165, 155 and 155 respectively. They spent around 145 on purchasing
racquets
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and it is the least spent by them.
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, Germans spent only between 145 to 150 on every item. They purchased photographic
films
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, scents and
tennis
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bats for 150 and
toys
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and CDs for 145.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words films, toys, tennis, racquets with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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