The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. » You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

» You should write at least 150 words.
The chart depicts the expenditure used on six consumer goods
such
as Photographic
films
,
toys
, CDs, perfumes,
tennis
racquets
and personal stereos in four countries, namely Britain, France, Italy and Germany.
Overall
, Britishers spent more on all the
good
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compared to other nations. Britishers spent more money(170) on photographic
films
, followed by
toys
(around 167) and they spent
least
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money on
tennis
racquets
and personal
steroes
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stereos
for
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apply
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155.
However
, Italy has allocated an equivalent amount for the purchase of photographic
films
, perfumes and
tennis
racquets
,
totaling
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totalling
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150, marking the highest expenditure by Italians. French individuals ranked in terms of expenditure on photographic
films
,
toys
and
CD's
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CDs
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with
amount
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amounts
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of 165, 155 and 155 respectively. They spent around 145 on purchasing
racquets
and it is the least spent by them.
However
, Germans spent only between 145 to 150 on every item. They purchased photographic
films
, scents and
tennis
bats for 150 and
toys
and CDs for 145.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words films, toys, tennis, racquets with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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