The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram gives a distribution of the period spent by
parents
in
caring for their wards at night in 2022.
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Overall
it is immediately apparent that,
women give more Remove the comma
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time
to activities
involving their children
than men. Also
, with both
parents
coming together, chances
of them spending more Correct article usage
the chances
time
in
carrying out some Change preposition
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activities
in
their Change preposition
with
children
is
higher.
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To begin
with, when it comes to mothers they spend approximately 75% of their time
to dress up their kids whilst only a third of this
figure at 25% is invested in the games their offspring play. Meanwhile, mothers apportion 50% of their time
getting involved in doing the homework of their kids. Likewise
, spending 42% to prepare these children
for bed.
With regards to both
parents
, 50% of the couple's time
is used to put their children
to sleep. By contrast
, only less than a half of this
period at 20% is used to dress their children
. However
, both
parents
use 70% of their time
to partake in their wards playing games a figure which surpases
the Correct your spelling
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time-frame
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time frame
both
parents
involve themselves in childrens'
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children's
activities
.
Turning to fathers only, they give the least time
to their childrens'
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children's
activities
. 10% of their time
is used to help with kids
homework whilst Change noun form
kids'
kid's
a
half of Remove the article
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this
for
playing games with their Add a missing verb
is for
children
as well as
preparing them for bed. Very little time
, about 2%, is spent on putting clothes on their offspring.Submitted by nmaureen03 on
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 3 times.
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