Some people think that robots are important for humans’ future development. Others think that robot have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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due to
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robots
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with, there is no question that the availability of Linking Words
robots
poses a hazardous impact on Use synonyms
human’s
prospects. To elaborate Change noun form
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, it has been witnessed that industries have an extreme reliance on robotic Change preposition
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machines
. That, in turn, Use synonyms
have
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workforces, resulting in redundancy and Change preposition
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unempolyment
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unemployment
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while
manufacturers, in order to Linking Words
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productivities
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productivity
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machines
have superseded employees. Eventually, an increasing number of Use synonyms
labours
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labourers
stifled
by unemployment. Add a missing verb
were stifled
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why, Linking Words
robots
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their
policy makers
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policymakers
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laws
labours
, ensuring parallel prospects for breadwinners Correct your spelling
labourers
along with
retraining them to cope with artificial Linking Words
intelligant
rather than redundancy.
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intelligence
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the other hand, it is irrefutable that Change preposition
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abundance
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the abundance
robots
offers Use synonyms
plethora
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envirenmental
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environmental
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aeroplanes
to overcome
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in overcoming
Thus
, Linking Words
robots
play a vital role when replaced by Use synonyms
human
in serious situations in all fields.
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humans
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the workforce
workforce
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machines
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medical to Change preposition
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infections, Correct your spelling
avoid
industies
to increase outcomes and explorations .Correct your spelling
industries
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