Some countries achieve international sports by building specialized facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion

Different countries have

build

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special facilities to prepare top

athletes

and by that have achieved international sports,

instead

of giving all the people

chance

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to do sport. I

am disagree

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with the given statement

,

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because in my personal

opinion

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everyone should have

chance

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to show themselves.

However

, the

government

should build

a specialized facilities

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specialized facilities

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, to prepare and

train

international

athletes

,

instead

of

train

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training

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them with newcomers and average

citizen

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citizens

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. They have to

train

hard,

to

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face

with

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difficulties and

athletes

all around the world and gain with hard

job

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, a gold medal for their country.

Therefore

, top

athletes

have their own specialized training system and

full time

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full-time

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crew members that

helps

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with any type of problem. But, there

is

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average people, who want to get the same experience with their own crew and special training system,

instead

of working in a group of others. For

government

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, it is a money question,

therefore

it may cause

a drawbacks

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drawbacks

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as

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increasing

of

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taxes for

citizen

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citizens

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because it is cost a lot, to pay and hold different buildings, crew members, medical purposes and etc.

Overall

, the

government

should pay attention to people who

wants

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train

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to train

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and lose weight or become professional

athletes

and reach

new

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top and gain experience with a lot of different achievements. But, do not forget about already top

athletes

and help them get new powers for tournaments,

also

they could be personal trainers on vacation or

make

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group training for different ages.

Also

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the

government

can bring investors to help with providing sports facilities for everyone in

country

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the country

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.