You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
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The graph compares the
time
a teacher uses when teaching students
at different institutions in 4 nations in 2001.
Overall
it is immediately apparent that more time
is allocated to students
at the higher levels than those in the lower stages. The USA
spent the most time
on learners at all stages compared to the other countries.
To begin
with, teachers spend more time
teaching students
at higher educational levels compared with their junior counterparts. The USA
spends close to 1200 hours
teaching Upper Secondary whilst about 500 hours
less than this
time
is utilised by Japanese tutors to educate learners at the same level. Interestingly, Spain spends as much time
as Iceland on
Change preposition
in
this
same student category at 900 hours
.
With regards to primary schoolers, they are taught within the shortest possible time
. 600 hours
is
allocated by Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Japan
teachers to these pupils. Replace the word
Japanese
Likewise
Spain and Iceland, where
just over 600 Rephrase
apply
hours
and nearly 600 hours
are given to these learners. Meanwhile, the USA
uses 150 hours
higher than the average time
in the
other countries for Correct article usage
apply
tuition
of primary school children.
Turning to the lower secondary school Add an article
the tuition
students
, the USA
spends 1000 hours
whilst both Japan Iceland
Correct word choice
and Iceland
allocates
just above half Correct subject-verb agreement
allocate
this
time
to these students
. Spain on the other hand
spends 750 hours
on them.Submitted by nmaureen03 on
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, students, usa, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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