The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts give information about
units
of electricity
production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. In Australia, the most resource used in 1980 was coal with almost 50 units
then
there was nuclear power
about 20. Furthermore
, another source was natural gas with 20 and to conclude
oil.
In 2000, we had a huge change in fact the total production had increased by about 170 with an increase about
coal about 130 and a decrease in the two sources.
In France, we had a different situation in 1980, Natural gas and coal were the most Change preposition
of
source
used with 25 Change the noun form
sources
units
of electricity
and then
there were oil, nuclear power
and hydro
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hydropower
power
, respectively 20, 15 and 5. For
instance
in 2000, Nuclear Add a comma
,instance
power
was becoming the majority of electricity
with almost 126 units
.
All in all, there was a lot of change on
the different fuel sources for making the amount of Change preposition
in
electricity
in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.Submitted by afiorentino404346 on
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