The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
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of
electricity
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production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. In Australia, the most resource used in 1980 was coal with almost 50
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then
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there was nuclear
power
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about 20.
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, another source was natural gas with 20 and
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oil. In 2000, we had a huge change in fact the total production had increased by about 170 with an increase
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coal about 130 and a decrease in the two sources. In France, we had a different situation in 1980, Natural gas and coal were the most
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used with 25
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of
electricity
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and
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there were oil, nuclear
power
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and
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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, respectively 20, 15 and 5.
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in 2000, Nuclear
power
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was becoming the majority of
electricity
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with almost 126
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. All in all, there was a lot of change
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the different fuel sources for making the amount of
electricity
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in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words units, electricity, power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity production
  • Fuel source
  • Renewable sources
  • Non-renewable sources
  • Significant change
  • Evolved
  • Dominant source
  • Introduction of new sources
  • Reliance
  • Electricity production mix
  • Environmental implications
  • Future trend
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