Write an essay for a university lecturer on the following topic: Business education and training today must promote environmental awareness.

Awareness of the

enviroment

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environment

should be taught in business schools. In my point of view, our future will be destroyed by global warming if we do not try to stop or reduce pollution now.

To begin

with,

Vehicale

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vehicles

with emissions that

affecting

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affect

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air quality should be replaced with Electric cars. In the era of

huge

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a huge

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human population causes insane numbers of vehicles which pollutes the oxygen badly.

For instance

, Scandinavian countries are the top countries

who

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that

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educate their people to use Electric cars. They end up now with

a

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apply

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clean and less polluted air, Electric cars

saves

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save

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their future lives by improving air quality.

Also

,

plastics

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plastic waste

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wastes

consider

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is considered

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one of the huge

factor

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factors

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that

causing

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cause

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pollution. Business schools should

taught

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teach

be taught

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the student how to help in recycling the

wastes

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waste

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instead

of throwing it and dirtying the earth.

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, Singapore

are

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is

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the cleanest country in the world, they taught their children from

early

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an early

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age about how to recycle plastic

wastes

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waste

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.

Moreover

, in

Singapore

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Singapore,

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if someone

throw

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throws

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anything in the street they will be ordered to pay a fine.

To conclude

, In my

opinion

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opinion,

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business schools should

creates

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create

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campaigns that spread

enviromental

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environmental

awareness.

Also

, they should include in their curriculum trash

recycle

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recycling

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training to eliminate

wastes

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waste

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in the world.