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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The line graph depicts information about the population of individuals who peaked at 65 years old and over measured in 6 periods between 1940 and 2040 in Japan, Sweden, and the United States.
Overall
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, Sweden and the US started at the same levels,
moreover
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, finished the same, with some fluctuating periods.
However
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, the Japanese oldest ones fluctuated at the same point 60 years.
To begin
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 with, Sweden and the United States line’s started at 7 and 9, respectively, gradually increasing until the 1990s, when Sweden’s residents dramatically increased to 20% in 2010 and will peak at 25% in 2040,
while
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 the Americans will peak at 20% by steadily enhancing in the end.
On the other hand
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, Japan’s line began at the lowest rate of the statistics and was low until 2010.
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, the land of the rising sun 65+ livers will increase slightly until 2030 and drastically rise to 28% in 2040.

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