Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoys their lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that

children

should be drawn to doing some work for their parents,

while

there are others who believe it is better to enjoy their lives. In my opinion, I believe that fulfilling some housework is essential for boosting their maturity

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while

having fun is better than having a rest in a stressful environment.           On the one hand, many think taking on responsibilities fosters

children

’s significant values and abilities to become well-bred adults. By engaging in

such

activities

, they can learn the value of responsibility and discipline. It means that

this

can

also

lead younger people to perceive the importance of being a member of a family, involving them in household chores

such

as cleaning or shopping.

Furthermore

, young people can learn

time

management, consistency, and problem-solving skills, which play a crucial role in achieving success in adulthood.          

On the other hand

, doing entertaining

activities

outside gives

children

a sense of relaxation, like taking

time

with their families or friends after an exhausting day at school.

Moreover

, doing outside

activities

serves their personal development, which is essential for the future.

For example

, playing games enhances their creativity, imagination, and social skills through cooperation in teamwork.

Therefore

, being motivated by their own priorities can prevent them from getting stressed and pursuing their goals on their own self-development path.          

Finally

, in my opinion,

while

children

should know how to accomplish domestic work as they need it for their future lives, their enjoyment of life or entertainment should not be neglected. What it means is that it would be useful to give them age-appropriate tasks,

such

as helping with grocery shopping or organising their clothes.

Thus

, parents should be sure that their

children

have enough

time

and energy to spend

time

with their loved ones.           In conclusion, giving

children

household responsibilities benefits them in terms of formalising their mature spirit.

For

this

reason, carers should be careful about the amount of work in order to let them have fun with leisure

activities

.