Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that the relevant authorities should divert the attention toward allocating a significant budget for

railways

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properties,

while

others contend that developing

roads

has a paramount importance rather than other transportation modes.

However

, I believe that the availability of various kinds of transportation modes is considered as far as the same significance for communities. To embark on, the abundance

railways

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a pivotal role in diverse aspects for centuries.

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, by the course of history

as well as

the contemporary era,

railways

mandate the easiest, cheapest and

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fastest transition mode for travelling, trading movements,

supplying

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commodities

along with

military services.

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, it has a substantial impact on the vigorous economic growth in developed and developing countries.

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,

while

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railroads in the vast acreage states, in comparison with other vehicles, pose the fastest, readiest

the

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distant

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between regions.

For example

, when students and occupants in Upper Egypt

have travelled

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travel

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to Delta cities and

capital

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the capital

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city they spend 2 days by

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car

while

by fast trains they merely arrive within less period could be 7 hours approximately.

That is

why, the government should alter the attention toward

railways

and funding their restorations.

Furthermore

, there is a public consensus that

roads

have emerged in the major cities as a pressing problem. When dwellers

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stifled by a sheer volume of congestion, an increasing number of traffic jams and incidents, owing to the

roads

regression and a lack of adequate

roads

for citizens.

Subsequently

, it has a detrimental influence on goods distribution to local retailers or supplying goods, commuting for work, universities, schools, and other consequences on

citizens

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well-being.

Thus

, it is essential to

expend

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financially and expand other

roads

for sprawling areas and refurbish the demolished ways to avoid accidents.

To conclude

, I completely agree that the government should allocate

a

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considerable monetary funding for both

railway

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railways

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because of their significance for trade

exchanging

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as

it

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play

role

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in the national income and travelling between

such

long distant cities, and

roads

to avert any road risks, reinforce nation's safety and eliminate congestion is noteworthy.