Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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properties,

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others contend that developing

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has a paramount importance rather than other transportation modes.

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, I believe that the availability of various kinds of transportation modes is considered as far as the same significance for communities. To embark on, the abundance

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a pivotal role in diverse aspects for centuries.

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, by the course of history

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the contemporary era,

railways

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mandate the easiest, cheapest and

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fastest transition mode for travelling, trading movements,

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and supplying

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commodities

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military services.

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, it has a substantial impact on the vigorous economic growth in developed and developing countries.

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railroads in the vast acreage states, in comparison with other vehicles, pose the fastest, readiest

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distant

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between regions.

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, when students and occupants in Upper Egypt

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to Delta cities and

capital

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city they spend 2 days by

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by fast trains they merely arrive within less period could be 7 hours approximately.

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why, the government should alter the attention toward

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and funding their restorations.

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, there is a public consensus that

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have emerged in the major cities as a pressing problem. When dwellers

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stifled by a sheer volume of congestion, an increasing number of traffic jams and incidents, owing to the

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regression and a lack of adequate

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for citizens.

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, it has a detrimental influence on goods distribution to local retailers or supplying goods, commuting for work, universities, schools, and other consequences on

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well-being.

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, it is essential to

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financially and expand other

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for sprawling areas and refurbish the demolished ways to avoid accidents.

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, I completely agree that the government should allocate

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considerable monetary funding for both

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because of their significance for trade

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as

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play

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in the national income and travelling between

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long distant cities, and

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to avert any road risks, reinforce nation's safety and eliminate congestion is noteworthy.