In many countries, people increasingly talk about money such as how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations. Why? Is this a positive or negative trend?

As technology progressed to computers and
then
to
smart phones
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companies were creating and investing more
into
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digital commercials.
Furthermore
,
people
started to spend more
due to
eye-catching advertisements and soon they started noticing how paychecks evaporated in a few days.
This
made some individuals worried about their income and spending,
therefore
, the talk about
money related
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topics became more regular in
day to day
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conversations. Personally, I do not see that
this
topic should be as a big part of
conversation
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as it is and in
this
essay
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I will elaborate on why talking about
money
is a negative trend. First of all, I believe that
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increase
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in
money
talk will make
people
care about material things more than
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the
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loved ones or friends. It is easy to complain about rising prices or lack of
money
, but continue to do
this
more and more and you will see how you know where to find the best deal for a sofa, but you can not tell how your friends’ day has been or what their
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color
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is.
Moreover
,
people
who are willing to talk about
money
more than anything put less and less effort to know somebody or
be
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interested in their life, which can lead to losing
people
very close to you, which can become very lonely and depressing.
Secondly
, having a bigger care in
money
make
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us more and more materialistic and by
this
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we continue to lose the definition of life. I think that reminding others or being reminded about
money
in almost every conversation puts us in
the
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constant state of worrying about
money
were
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we try as hard as possible to earn more, spend less and find the best deals. In
this
stage we forget to actually
to
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take joy in living, taking all the views,
smells
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of the world. We tend to forget what are we even working for. Are we working to have a car with a sunroof or to take your partner to
spa
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and create romantic memories?
And sadly
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, because of the worry we lose our
selfs’
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and forget to ask
this
crucial question and start living as
a slaves
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for the coin
not
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for the memories or feelings. In conclusion, I would say that
the
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chatting about
increase
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in prices or how many zeros there are in their paycheck is very degrading.
People
tend to lose interest in
such
people
who do not show any interest in them.
Furthermore
,
such
people
not only lose connection with
other
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others
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, but life itself and living just to earn more and spend on shiner things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • materialism
  • financial transparency
  • societal taboos
  • economic fluctuations
  • financial management
  • financial literacy
  • purchasing decisions
  • wealth glorification
  • economic stratification
  • social comparison
  • peer pressure
  • income disparity
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