The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These maps illustrate an
area
surrounded by industries in the Norbiton city and plan of
Change preposition
for
further
improvement of that area
.
The later development plan is something bigger than the present scenario. There is nothing in this
area
but factories now whereas
planning for future
includes various establishments removing all the factories.
Norbiton is an Industry-based place now.A river is blowing from the west to the east and farmlands are situated on the other side of the river. In the new plan, A bridge will be built and the farmland will be changed into Correct article usage
the future
housing
Add an article
a housing
the housing
area
. A connecting road
from the present centre to the bridge will be constructed and a north-west road
also
. Housing
Correct article usage
A housing
area
will be built beside these roads.
In Addition
, shops and medical centres will take place near to
two opposite sides of Change preposition
apply
newly
developed circle with connecting roads from the west to the east. Correct article usage
the newly
This
road
will also
head to the old circle. All the factories in the east will be replaced by houses. Additionally
, a playground will be made alongside the river. A school will be situated at the ending
of the eastern Replace the word
end
road
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