The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These maps illustrate an
area
surrounded by industries in the Norbiton city and plan
of
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for
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further
improvement of that
area
. The later development plan is something bigger than the present scenario. There is nothing in
this
area
but factories now
whereas
planning for
future
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the future
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includes various establishments removing all the factories. Norbiton is an Industry-based place now.A river is blowing from the west to the east and farmlands are situated on the other side of the river. In the new plan, A bridge will be built and the farmland will be changed into
housing
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a housing
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area
. A connecting
road
from the present centre to the bridge will be constructed and a north-west
road
also
.
Housing
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A housing
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area
will be built beside these roads.
In Addition
, shops and medical centres will take place near
to
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apply
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two opposite sides of
newly
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the newly
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developed circle with connecting roads from the west to the east.
This
road
will
also
head to the old circle. All the factories in the east will be replaced by houses.
Additionally
, a playground will be made alongside the river. A school will be situated at the
ending
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end
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of the eastern
road
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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