The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
number
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of foreign
visitors
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who visited the
coast
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, the
mountains
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, and the lakes in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of foreign
visitors
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for all three areas has increased during the years. The
coast
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had the greatest
number
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of
visitors
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, and the
mountains
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had the least in 2007. In 1987, the
coast
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had 40,000
visitors
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which is double that of the
mountains
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. It
then
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dropped slightly to around 35,000 in 1992 which was
also
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the lowest record during the years. After that, it increased significantly and hit a peak in 2007 with more than 70,000
visitors
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visiting the
coast
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during the year. The lakes had the smallest
number
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in 1987 with only 10,000
visitors
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,
while
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it rose sharply from 1987 and hit a peak in 2002 with more than 70,000
visitors
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during the year, the
number
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then
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decreased dramatically to 50,000 in 2007. The total
number
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of
visitors
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to the
mountains
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was steady during the year. It increased slightly from 20000 in 1987 to 35000 in 2007.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, coast, mountains with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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