The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
number
of foreign visitors
who visited the coast
, the mountains
, and the lakes in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, the total number
of foreign visitors
for all three areas has increased during the years. The coast
had the greatest number
of visitors
, and the mountains
had the least in 2007.
In 1987, the coast
had 40,000 visitors
which is double that of the mountains
. It then
dropped slightly to around 35,000 in 1992 which was also
the lowest record during the years. After that, it increased significantly and hit a peak in 2007 with more than 70,000 visitors
visiting the coast
during the year.
The lakes had the smallest number
in 1987 with only 10,000 visitors
, while
it rose sharply from 1987 and hit a peak in 2002 with more than 70,000 visitors
during the year, the number
then
decreased dramatically to 50,000 in 2007.
The total number
of visitors
to the mountains
was steady during the year. It increased slightly from 20000 in 1987 to 35000 in 2007.Submitted by sherwoodchan1218 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, coast, mountains with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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