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You work a company. You have been seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course

#work #company #information #course #manager
Dear Sir or Manager. I am going to
aware
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 of
somethings
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some things
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 to you, Which
is
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are
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 related to
open
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 the
course
 for improving our company
In addition
, Under paragraphs will give some recommendations. There are many types of
course
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courses
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, But I have recently put my own
course
. People can accept and know
necessary
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the necessary
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 information. My private
course
called
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is called
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 MP. During manufacturing products, we have to follow some rules. Those will
comrised
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comprised
 follows,
While
 selling, we need to smile
to
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at
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 clients and We have to know the amount of price which needs to be comfortable for
consumer
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the consumer
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. We will give
like
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apply
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the details. I think, Given the
recommanditions
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recommendations
, will be beneficial. As you know, we would see IT, MP and others.
However
, It and
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WPN
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 are the most powerful and needful
course
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courses
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, As
i
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I
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 give examples about
Mp
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MP
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on
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in
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above
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the above
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 paragraph, In Training
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the couse
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couse
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course
 will be
tought
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taught
tough
thought
stuff's
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staff's
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action
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actions
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, During
selling
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the selling
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, how to behave themself,
Moreover
, They should put
cheap
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a cheap
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 price. Yours sincerely, Sarvinoz.
Submitted by sarvinozjumayeva813 on

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task response
Ensure to provide specific details of the training course, including its name, duration, and content.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas in a more coherent manner using clear topic sentences and appropriate linking words.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Training course
  • Useful
  • Manager
  • Details
  • Topics covered
  • Importance
  • Benefits
  • Work
  • Company
  • Help
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