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Some people think that a person intellectual skill improving more when they doing group study.What extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is said that by joining
study
 with a group, individuals can improve their own intellectual
skills
such
 as analytical
skills
 and cognitive abilities. I completely agree with the statement. As not only their intellectual intelligence but
also
 their interpersonal skill will improve as well. Foremost, compared to loner learners, people who
study
 in groups have the opportunity to share everything that they learnt including their experiences
,
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 and their knowledge ,... which helps them make those things studied from the groups their own.
Additionally
, since each person has their own experiences, countless mistakes that each of them faced will help the group to not stumble again.
For example
, if one had made a mistake in a math test, they would remember it and tell others to not make it again.
Furthermore
, every individual has their own advantages, which will create variety
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study
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 environment. Not only that, daily physical interaction among friends in the group exceeds people's interpersonal
skills
.
For instance
, inevitable arguments will happen but the ability to counter-arguments will thrive as participants have to use sounding points to argue back and since mostly they share the same ages , they will not back down the heated fights. Other
skills
such
 as communication, and body language will
also
 thrive and will be a helping hand for them in the long run. In a nutshell, there is shouldn't any doubt for learners when they try to adopt the grouping
study
 method as many benefits will be brought to the table
such
 as improving their cognitive abilities,
as well as
 soft
skills
 that might help them in the future
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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