The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate one
station
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that is
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called Pacific Railway
Station
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and how it has changed from 1998 till these days.
Overall
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, it is seen that the
station
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has been enlarged and there have been added more facilities like a restaurant, supermarket and additional shop.
Moreover
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, the number of platforms has increased.
According to
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the map, in 1998 the train
station
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was visibly smaller, at the entrance there was a shop, a cafe, and a small ticket office. In the centre of the Pacific Railway
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there were toilets and on the right of them four train platforms. Compared to nowadays, three more platforms have been added to the opposite side. What is more, the cafe remained at the same spot,
however
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, the ticket office has been extended and the shop that was in the middle shifted. On the bottom left the supermarket has been built, and in the spot where toilets used to be there is now a big shopping spot for travellers which includes two stores and a restaurant. The toilets were placed somewhere else as they are no longer seen on the updated map.
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