The pie chart below show the online shopping sales for retail sector in new Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The provided diagram illustrates the proportion of online shopping sales
arcoss
four different domains over ten-year periods in New Zealand.
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Overall
, it is clear from the pie chart that travel and clothes conquer
the highest rate in 2003 Verb problem
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then
in 2013 entertainment became the highest followed by traveling throughout the reporting time.
Observing the details, it is remarkable that year 2003, traveling reached its peak at approximately 36% in 2003 then
slowly dropped to 29% in 2013. Similarly
, clothing started at roughly 24% in 2003 but unfortunately fell to 16% in 2013.
On the contrary
, entertainments
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high levels gradually rose in 2013, entertainment along the lines of films and music dramatically rose to 33% Change preposition
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the top of the chart. As books became more popular and soared to 22% throughout the reporting period.Change preposition
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