Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To waht extent to you agree or disagree?

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businesses

or the Council

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for the

recreation

facilities

for local communities.

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my point of view, I would suggest that the government could be the one who should create

sports

and social equipment for local

people

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evidence. First of all, some

people

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businesses

should support the local communities

through

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providing

sports

and social

facilities

.

Sports

equipment will help

people

in terms of

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people

's healthy life and social

facilities

will encourage them to communicate and exchange the culture

winthin

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within

the

communties

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communities

.

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, the companies may see

this

idea as an opportunity to advertise their brand to the

local

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, it may cause an uncomfortable to

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as

companies'

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the companies'

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logo

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and

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will be located surrounding

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, there are some researchers in

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recent years

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revealed that more than half of local

sports

and social

facilities

are

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private

funded. Second of all,

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goverment

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government

should be

responded

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to provide

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for providing

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sports

and social

facilitities

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facilities

for local communities. By

the

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supporting and building of government, the image of

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would be better because of ad-free

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recreation

areas.

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, the

businesses

are being taxed by the

goverment

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government

and a part of

this

money should be funded to create

recreation

facilities

for local

people

.

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that way, local

people

may have more

motivations

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to support the

businesses

.

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, the

sports

and social

facilities

should be carried out by the

authotities

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authorities

rather than the

businesses

. To avoid private advertising in mainly

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areas,

government

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would be a major

responsibility

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for the local

facilities

rather than

companies

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the companies

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.