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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. Whats your opinion about it?

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Nowadays, there are several methods to transfer
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, visual images or diagrams
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 in the morning news. Several experts say that images are better than words. Personally, I agree with
this
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 opinion, and the following content will list the reasons. The images can illustrate simple but clear
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 than words. Usually, we
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abundance
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 of language to describe the details of a situation,
however
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, a picture or a chart can
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 only one page to present the same
information
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, the reporter prefers to
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 some pictures of the events with verbal
description
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 in the news rather than pure verbal
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, humans understand
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visual input more
effective
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 because of the brain. Recently, some scientific research
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 that human
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 70% of the brain to transform visual
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, which
mean
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means
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 the knowledge we learn
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 majorly
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 on our eyes.
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, comparing the learning speed of understanding the
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 of items and the meaning of words or phrases, the former
one
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will easily
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 by infants because they are born to know the usage of their eyes, as for the language, they will need more training about it. In conclusion,
due to
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 the simple but clear details which are brought by the visual
information
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 and the organs we have since we were born, the picture will be an effective
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 to transfer the
information
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As a result
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, if people want to make an easily
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 presentation, they better combine their report with pictures for the audience to simply learn the knowledge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convey
  • emotions
  • capture
  • attention
  • evoke
  • impact
  • context
  • detailed information
  • journalism
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