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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The given table compares how many
people
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 visited the Ashdown Museum in two years, before and after its refurbishment and the pie charts illustrate the scale of visitors' satisfaction during their visit in the same two years.
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, it is clear from the table that the number of
people
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 who attended to visit the Ashdown Museum after its renovation increased significantly.
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, the proportion of dissatisfied folks in the
year
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 before refurbishment turns to satisfy
people
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 in the
year
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 after it recovered. By focusing on the table, we can see that the total number of museum guests rose from 74000 during the
year
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 before recovery to 92000 visitors in the
year
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 after restoration.
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, by looking at the pie charts the most significant point would be the percentage of dissatisfied visitors which was 40% during the
year
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 before renovation and
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 decreased to 15% following the
year
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 after improvement,
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 the ratio of satisfied and very satisfied
people
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 in the first
year
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 increased from 30% to 40% and 15% to 35% respectively in the period after improvement.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor statistics
  • satisfaction survey
  • seasonal trends
  • demographics
  • benchmarking
  • feedback mechanisms
  • amenities
  • exhibitions
  • customer experience
  • turnaround
  • user engagement
  • footfall
  • improvements
  • disparities
  • perception
  • enhancements
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