The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The given table compares how many
people
visited the Ashdown Museum in two years, before and after its refurbishment and the pie charts illustrate the scale of visitors' satisfaction during their visit in the same two years.
Overall
, it is clear from the table that the number of people
who attended to visit the Ashdown Museum after its renovation increased significantly. In addition
, the proportion of dissatisfied folks in the year
before refurbishment turns to satisfy people
in the year
after it recovered.
By focusing on the table, we can see that the total number of museum guests rose from 74000 during the year
before recovery to 92000 visitors in the year
after restoration.
Furthermore
, by looking at the pie charts the most significant point would be the percentage of dissatisfied visitors which was 40% during the year
before renovation and then
decreased to 15% following the year
after improvement, also
the ratio of satisfied and very satisfied people
in the first year
increased from 30% to 40% and 15% to 35% respectively in the period after improvement.Submitted by hamed.rmz1990 on
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