The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.

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The diagram illustrates information about how the

aluminium

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drinks

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cans

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are recycled in the

aluminium

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recycling plant.

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it is clear that

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there are four steps of repleted

cans

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recycling from used

drinks

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cans

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to new

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with fresh products in them. The first stage is that

cans

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, which are used, are collected from the collection centre and delivered by trucks to the recycling centre. After that, all used

aluminium

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cans

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are collected and sent to the

aluminium

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recycling plant. Once all

cans

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arrive at the

aluminium

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section, they are all melted down to a liquid form and reformed into a solid shape.

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new

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columns are produced, and

following

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this

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they are reshaped to be

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roll, which is as thin as paper and the

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roll

are

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used to make new drink

cans

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. The final stage is that they are filled up with new

drinks

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products and refilled at the

drinks

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machine.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words aluminium, drinks, cans with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Recycling process
Aluminium cans
Collection and sorting
Recycling facility
High-temperature furnaces
Liquid aluminium
Ingots
Rolling mill
Thin sheets
Cutting and shaping
Reforming
Sterilized
Beverages
Distribution
Retailers

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The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.

Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others argue it is the responsibility of each individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern society, it is no longer necessary to slaughter animals for producing food, or non-food products such as clothes or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

Technology has caused the death of traditional skills and ways of life. It is pointless to ensure their survival. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that climate has the greatest affect on people's way of life. Others believe that the economy of a region has the greatest effect. This is both the views and give your opinion.