The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.
The diagram illustrates information about how the
aluminium
drinks
cans
are recycled in the aluminium
recycling plant. Overall
, it is clear that
there are four steps of repleted cans
recycling from used drinks
cans
to new cans
with fresh products in them.
The first stage is that cans
, which are used, are collected from the collection centre and delivered by trucks to the recycling centre. After that, all used aluminium
cans
are collected and sent to the aluminium
recycling plant.
Once all cans
arrive at the aluminium
section, they are all melted down to a liquid form and reformed into a solid shape. Then
new Correct your spelling
The
aluminium
columns are produced, and following
this
they are reshaped to be Add a comma
,this
aluminium
roll, which is as thin as paper and the aluminium
roll are
used to make new drink Correct subject-verb agreement
is
cans
. The final stage is that they are filled up with new drinks
products and refilled at the drinks
machine.Submitted by patinyajaithan on
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