the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport City centre from 2002-2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph indicates how the pattern of crimes evolved in different neighbourhoods in Newport City between 2002 and 2012. As we can see from the figure beneath, the diagram points out the rates of burglary, car theft and robbery.
There are three kinds of infractions,
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the black continuous line describes that the amount of incidents per burglary had their peak in 2004. Later they diminished drastically until 2004 when the trend has been stabilized.
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, the broken line illustrates the pattern of car thefts in the inner city, which had a meagre decrease in 2006, Linking Words
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, after that has returned to increase to the original number of violations in 2012. Linking Words
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, the dotted line, that outlines the robberies, Linking Words
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criminal acts has not registered relevant variations in its trend.
In conclusion, the only type of offences that have manifested progress is burglary, whilst car theft and robbery have been contained.Change preposition
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