Students prefer doing part-time jobs during their studies. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this?

In the contemporary

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world

, part-time jobs become much

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than ever before.

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, many scholars prefer attending

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due to

numerous merits,

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consideration.

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my perspective,

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do advocate

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tendency, and

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essay with clarify my idea utterly.

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pose

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effect on individual finance and economic

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. Joining into employment soon provides self-reliance to the young generation.

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irregular occupation allow students to have a

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regular

wage

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a very young age, which

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as

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motivation for economic growth in not too distant future.

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, having a particular income

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help

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students less depend on their family budget, significantly

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spending

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burden for their

parents

.

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,

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also

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attendents

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attendees

improve their quality, grasping futuristic opportunities. As can be seen manifestly, success virtually

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from

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stability in

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. Pupils with early earnings

are incline

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to meet more

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circumstances , from their work to study later.

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,

student

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can use their income in self-investment.

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money for some social classes,

softskills

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soft skills

soft-skills

courses may have long-term effects. In spite of

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benefits, it is inevitable to meet disadvantages.

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can badly affect

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to

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much attention

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their part-time jobs

instead

of ensuring

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balance

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work and study,

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a quality decline will be derived from

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trend

.

Furthermore

, attending school and working at the same time prevent proper parental control. It might be very difficult for

parents

to guide and control

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student

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since they have two major activities that take their time.

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, some

parents

might not know their children's status

consequently

leading to

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of proper monitoring.

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,

a

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parents

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parents

might not know if the

student

is at work or in school.

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act

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the children too much freedom. In conclusion,

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impose

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multiple benefits, it

also

provide

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multitude

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of demerits. To apply

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trends

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effectively, it

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depends a lot

on self-consciousness

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parental trust and engagement.