The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The provided line graph illustrates the data about the proportion of the
population
in four Asian
countries
between the period of 1970 to 2020, with the future predictions for 2030 to 2040.
Overall
, there are four
countries
Philippines,
Malaysia
,
Thailand
and
Indonesia
. The number of people increased and will increase in all
countries
over the era.
Malaysia
will be the number one country in terms of
population
. In 1970, the
population
of
Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
show examples
and
Malaysia
was almost the same about 30%. In 1992, the number of people in
Malaysia
surpassed
Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
show examples
and reached
at
Change preposition
apply
show examples
approximately 75% in 2020. In 2040, the
population
will be at more than 80%.
On the other hand
, the
population
of
Malaysia
reached
at
Change preposition
apply
show examples
around 43% in 2020 and will be at more than 50% in 2040. In 1970, the
population
of
Thailand
started at less than 20% and
Indonesia
Change noun form
Indonesia's
show examples
population
was at around 13%. In 2000, both
countries
was
Change the verb form
were
show examples
at the same percentage about 28%
then
the
population
in
Indonesia
rose and reached
at
Change preposition
apply
show examples
approximately 50% in 2020. The
population
of
Thailand
remained the same in 2020. Both
Indonesia
and
Thailand
in the future will be at approximately 60% and 45% respectively.
Submitted by saadahmad33102 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, countries, malaysia, thailand, indonesia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: