People will never be willing to make the dramatic lifestyle change needed to control climate change.For this reasons,governments must force people to do so.To what extent do you agree or disagree.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience .Write at least 250 words.

It is very ostensible that human beings will never change
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for a good cause like limiting the effect of climate change.
Hence
, to prevent any disastrous catastrophe, the
government
is liable to take action and impose
law
enforcement upon
citizens
. In my opinion,
this
movement will bring
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in
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term
as well as
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an
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awareness among the citizen of their daily
activities
. The
government
has published various laws to limit
usage
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of plastics and Car emissions etc., as these are
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detrimental
for
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the environment
as well as
to our health. The
government
is organizing various campaigns to
transgress
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awareness of
such
activities
,
however
,
citizens
are not acting on those basis.
As a consequence
,
Law
enforcement has become the utmost crucial way to save
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mother nature
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and the
earth
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Earth
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. Human are so dependent on plastic for their daily
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activities
,
it
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is creating a havoc situation to remove it
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their life.
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of
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them
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is aware of the fact that plastics are non-biodegradable and stay forever by harming the environment and reacting with sunlight emitting harmful
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particles
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to
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the air and soil.
Hence
, the
government
has passed a
law
to emit all plastic usage from the market ,
otherwise
, the party will be held guilty and face
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extreme
measures of punishment like serving in jail. Autonomous
vehicle
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vehicles
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also
aid
into
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this
greater cause
for
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the emission of harmful chemicals into the air on a daily basis. Owning a car has become a nimble option now-these-days ,
that
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every household now owns
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at least
two
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autonomous
vehicle
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.
Hence
, it has become an
humangous
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humongous
humungous
problem.
Therefore
, the
government
has passed a
law
that every year each vehicle must
go
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an immense test called car emission ,
otherwise
, the owner will bear a huge amount of fine and jail punishment.
Although
these movements are extreme,
however
, to control the
repurcussions
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repercussions
of
such
harmful
activities
are
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important. The
Government
body has
also
set
an
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criteria for
the
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autonomous companies to build cars
such
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a way that
emission
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the emission
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of harmful particles must be less. It is wise to
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conclude
that
Citizens
are reprehensible for the effects of climate change as they are not regulating their
activities
towards fostering a better Earth.
Therefore
, to control the
citizens
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harmful
activities
towards
our
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mother nature
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, the
government
must establish a system to limit
such
actions and if needed , enforce
law
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the law
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upon them.
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such
extreme measures,
it
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will help
fostering
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a better environment to live in and keep
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Mother Nature
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healthy as well.
This
movement will bear fruit for
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the
an
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unfathomable turn of time.
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