The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures illustrate the old map of the
centre
of Islip
City
and the predicted plan for some improvement in
this
particular
part
of the
city
. In general, what stands out from the maps is that several changes will apply to the
city
centre
and facilities become more concentrated. By focusing on the
centre
of the two maps, we can see that the main road in the old map will change to a pathway for pedestrians only.
In addition
, some shops which were located in the northern
part
of the
city
centre
will turn into a shopping
centre
, car park, bus station and some new housing.
Also
, the
city
will occupy the countryside in the northern
part
of the
city
. Looking at the southern
part
of the Islip, what is seen is that shops will remain at the same location and in the same form.
Furthermore
, by decreasing the size of the park, which is located in the southeast of the
city
centre
, some new buildings will be added to the
city
. School and other housing places will stay without any changes. Considerably, a dual carriageway surrounded the
city
centre
.
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