Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some individuals argue that the major intention of schools is to make

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into good citizens and laborers

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others claim that it is beneficial for children. In my opinion, I partially agree with

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statement, and my reason will be elaborated on in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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with, most of the subjects that are taught in schools aim to teach us how to be appropriate national for the government.

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, sometimes these courses are not really

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for pupils since they are not really interested in that subject,

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, they should pass these lessons which will teach them about acting politely, which leads to kind and respectful folks. As an example, social studies will aim to help us become well-behaved residents of society in the future.

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, the duration of time that juveniles spend attending school is equivalent to the work hours of worker individuals. Indeed, they both spend most of their golden time putting effort into tasks that they are disinterested in and

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of the day, they are just too exhausted to find their actual talent.

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, in some nations, some jobs are not considered

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real careers

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as being an artist and at times, families do not allow their child to follow their dreams and force them to be

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and work from 9 to 5 like other human beings. In conclusion, schools may play a significant role in pupils’ life,

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, most people

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that, their focus on nurturing good kids for the future system and

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, helpful workers in their place of work. I

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