The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
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The pie chart illustrates the main causes of land
degradation
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while
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the table reveals three regions which played a significant role in
this
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issue in different categories in the 1990s.
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,
it is clear that
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the over-grazing of animals accounted for the most causes of the
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productivation
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productization
productisation
of farmland. Meanwhile, Europe experienced the highest percentage of total
degradation
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.
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with, the figure showed that the highest percentage of causes of land
degradation
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in many nations was over-grazing at 35%, followed by deforestation of green areas at 28% and
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over-cultivation and other reasons at 28% and 7%, respectively. regarding the region, as is shown by the table, Europe saw the highest proportion compared to other nations with a total
degradation
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of 23% and detailly 98% for deforestation, 7.7% for over-cultivation and over-grazing in order of 5.5%.
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, North America witnessed the lowest figure by a total of 5.5%.
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, the trend of over-grazing in Oceania was the biggest among others with a proportion of 11.3%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words degradation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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