Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, crimes are increasing at the speed of light and have tremendous effects on our lives. For many folks, poverty is the significant reason behind all these criminal
activities
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while
others are opposed to it. Linking Words
However
, I strongly disagree with the given statement Linking Words
due to
several possible reasons which I believe should be considered seriously Linking Words
such
as psycho criminals, and modern crimes and the following paragraphs will expatiate both stances with lucid examples.
To commence with, the first and foremost logic to disagree with the uppermost statement is, that less money is not an issue in most crimes. To illustrate, cybercrime is the most dangerous activity nowadays, done by crowds based on hate or making more money. Linking Words
According to
the American survey, 80% of illegal Linking Words
activities
are done by white-collar job human beings to take revenge Use synonyms
instead
of fulfilling their basic needs. Second of all, the values and beliefs of the community do not let them do any kind of illegal things even if they are hungry. To exemplify, there are a number of houseless populations who are sleeping without food but don't perform any criminal Linking Words
activities
because of their moral values and customs. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the psychologist proved that psycho criminals are the most dangerous criminals who can perform anything to acquire fame from the public.
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On the other hand
of argument, some people believe that low-income people are performing these actions to achieve their basic needs. Linking Words
For example
, child kidnapping is one the perfect Linking Words
example
that comes to mind as society says they just want to earn good wealth for their future. Apart from that, another imperative logic to agree with the notion is,that a lot of humans feel that unemployment is another reason for having these actions in the community as they don't have dollars to spend, Fix the agreement mistake
examples
thus
, they start to do shopliftingLinking Words
,
and robbing. Remove the comma
apply
Furthermore
, several persons Linking Words
performing
illegal things to support their families Wrong verb form
perform
such
as corruption by the government employees. Linking Words
According to
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Indian
survey, 90-95% of the democracy employees are willing to do Correct article usage
an Indian
anthing
after Correct your spelling
anything
recieving
a good offer Correct your spelling
receiving
such
as fake signatures to make extra wealth. Linking Words
Therefore
, poverty is the powering issue to create any type of disturbance worldwide.
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To conclude
, there is no doubt that unemployment and basic needs Linking Words
such
as food and shelter are Linking Words
also
the reasons for Linking Words
this
scenario, Linking Words
besides
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that
I believe that the main problems are Add a comma
,that
the
revenge, greediness etc Correct article usage
apply
such
as hiking the data for revenge, kidnapping, rapes etc. Linking Words
Therefore
, the government should do something before it's too late for the family Linking Words
such
as follow the strict rules to overcome these situations. Linking Words
Hence
, poverty is not only the case of having any criminal Linking Words
activities
in the world.Use synonyms
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