The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.

The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.
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The chart
illsutrates
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illustrates
the takeaway
prefered
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preferred
by people in Canada and the amount of Indian
restaurant
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restaurants
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in Canada from the period 1960 to 2015.
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the figures show that the favourite takeaway by people in Canada is Chinese,
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with
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Italian,
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the least favorite takeaway is Mexican, Japanese and Greek restaurants. The percentage of Chinese showed the highest score with 34%, over
Indian
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Indians
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with 26%. Persian, Italian and the people who choose Never Order, followed a similar pattern with 9%, 10% and 11% respectively. With regards to Thai and Chinese, these both restaurants showed
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of the lowest numbers with 3% and 4%.
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, Mexican, Japanese and Greek food had the lowest percentage with 1% each of them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • favourite takeaways
  • people in Canada
  • number of Indian restaurants
  • 1960
  • 2015
  • types of takeaways
  • popular
  • 55 years
  • country
  • time frame
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