The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.
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the figures show that the favourite takeaway by people in Canada is Chinese, following
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the least favorite takeaway is Mexican, Japanese and Greek restaurants.
The percentage of Chinese showed the highest score with 34%, over Indian
with 26%. Persian, Italian and the people who choose Never Order, followed a similar pattern with 9%, 10% and 11% respectively. With regards to Thai and Chinese, these both restaurants showed Fix the agreement mistake
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, Mexican, Japanese and Greek food had the lowest percentage with 1% each of them.Submitted by dannie.sanval on
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