Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . describe the photograph you sent to the competition . tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown . invite him/her to the exhibition
Dear Tarry,
I hope you're fine. I'm so excited to share
a
news with you, I won an award for a photo contest.
The competition was held by the Warrington Correct determiner usage
some
council
as Capitalize word
Council
apart
of our national day. I sent a picture that I Correct your spelling
a part
taken
when we went Add a missing verb
had taken
for
our previous trip. You may guess how, yes! Change preposition
on
the
snap of Capitalize word
The
the
Correct article usage
apply
victoria street
in Edinburgh. Correct your spelling
Victoria Street
Along with
your facial expression
that photo became so natural and attractive. Behind your face, some tourists Add a comma
,expression
also
involved in that picture.
Yesterday, the council informed me about an exhibition that will be held Add a missing verb
are also
on
the famous "Times" Library in London, next week. The happiest part Change preposition
at
id
my picture will be there Verb problem
is that
along with
other famous photographs. I can't express my happiness because of your inspiration only I've clicked those pictures.
So, I'm inviting you to that occasion, without you it was not possible for me to achieve this
. They'll send a taci for travel so, don't worry about it and they'll also
return us to home.
I am eagerly waiting to hear from you soon.
With Love,
MarySubmitted by ansamerrin987 on
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coherence cohesion
Rearrange the sentences in the first paragraph to create a more logical flow of ideas. Start by mentioning the photograph and then provide details about the competition. You can also include more information about the award you won.
task achievement
Provide more information about the exhibition, such as the dates, location, and any special features.
coherence cohesion
Revise the closing to make it more appropriate for a letter to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,