20.More and more plastic is polluting cities, countrysides and oceans. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve it? Problem:

It is argued that an increasing number of
plastic
is
contamiting
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contaminating
the earth. The main problems are that
plastic
cannot be degraded and it puts animals in danger, and the most viable solutions are elaborating campaigns and not using
plastic
. The primary issue is that
plastic
cannot
disapear
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disappear
.
This
means that the used
plastic
need
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to be stored in different places, when there is not enough space, new places will be used,
such
as oceans, forests and places where
people
live, they are affected by
plastic
containers and it
also
damages
planet
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.
Furthermore
, when
plastic
reaches regions where there
are
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is
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wildlife, these animals can be trapped by the
pastic
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plastic
past
, which can cause wounds,
difficulty
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and difficulty
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on
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breathing and others may eat the
plastic
since they do not know what is
that
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apply
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.
For example
, in many videos on the Internet and in TV programs, it has been shown a lot of sea animals,
such
as turtles,
which
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are choked by
pastics
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plastics
for a very long time and when humans
tried
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to take the
plastic
out, obvious injuries marks can be seen. A solution for these problems is to carry out campaigns, encouraging more
people
to join and avoid
plastic
pollution, making individuals know how harmful can be the usage of
plastic
, in
this
way,
people
will use less amount of
plastic
. To tackle
with
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this
problem, another solution is to change the
plastic
products to other materials that are not detrimental,
such
as paper.
For instance
, in Spain,
mostly
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almost
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every establishment changed the use of
plastic
bags and
plastic
straws to
material
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materials
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made of paper, and the products made of
plastic
a
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extra fund need to be paid,
in
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for in
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this
way,
people
will prevent using
plastic
. In conclusion, the main problems of
plastic
pollution
is
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are
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the destruction of the planet and putting wildlife at risk,
however
,
this
can be addressed by making more
people
know about the danger of
plastic
contamination and
use
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using
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paper products
instead
of
plastic
.
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