20.More and more plastic is polluting cities, countrysides and oceans. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve it?
It is argued that an increasing number of
plastic
is contaminating the earth. The main problems are that plastic
cannot be degraded and it puts animals in danger, and the most viable solutions are elaborating campaigns and not using plastic
.
The primary issue is that plastic
cannot disappear. This
means that the used plastic
needs to be stored in different places, when there is not enough space, new places will be used, such
as oceans, forests and places where people
live, they are affected by plastic
containers and it also
damages the planet. Furthermore
, when plastic
reaches regions where there is wildlife, these animals can be trapped by the plastic
, which can cause wounds, and difficulty breathing and others may eat the plastic
since they do not know what is . For example
, in many videos on the Internet and in TV programs, it has been shown a lot of sea animals, such
as turtles, are choked by plastics for a very long time and when humans try to take the plastic
out, obvious injuries injury marks can be seen.
A solution for these problems is to carry out campaigns, encouraging more people
to join and avoid plastic
pollution, making individuals know how harmful can be the usage of plastic
, in this
way, people
will use less amount of plastic
. To tackle this
problem, another solution is to change the
Correct article usage
apply
plastic
products to other materials that are not detrimental, such
as paper. For instance
, in Spain, almost every establishment changed the use of plastic
bags and plastic
straws to materials made of paper, and for the products made of plastic
an extra fund needs to be paid, for in this
way, people
will prevent using plastic
.
In conclusion, the main problems of plastic
pollution are the destruction of the planet and putting wildlife at risk, however
, this
can be addressed by making more people
know about the danger of plastic
contamination and using paper products instead
of plastic
.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Achievement
Expand on the problems caused by plastic waste and provide more specific examples.
Coherence and Cohesion
Provide a stronger conclusion summarizing the main points discussed.
Lexical Resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and more varied sentence structures.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use proper grammar throughout the essay.