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20.More and more plastic is polluting cities, countrysides and oceans. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve it?

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It is argued that an increasing number of
plastic
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 is contaminating the earth. The main problems are that
plastic
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 cannot be degraded and it puts animals in danger, and the most viable solutions are elaborating campaigns and not using
plastic
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. The primary issue is that
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 cannot disappear.
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 means that the used
plastic
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 needs to be stored in different places, when there is not enough space, new places will be used,
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 as oceans, forests and places where
people
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 live, they are affected by
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 containers and it
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 damages the planet.
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, when
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 reaches regions where there is wildlife, these animals can be trapped by the
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, which can cause wounds, and difficulty breathing and others may eat the
plastic
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 since they do not know what is .
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, in many videos on the Internet and in TV programs, it has been shown a lot of sea animals,
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 as turtles, are choked by plastics for a very long time and when humans try to take the
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 out, obvious injuries injury marks can be seen. A solution for these problems is to carry out campaigns, encouraging more
people
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 to join and avoid
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 pollution, making individuals know how harmful can be the usage of
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, in
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 way,
people
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 will use less amount of
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. To tackle
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 problem, another solution is to change
the
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plastic
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 products to other materials that are not detrimental,
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 as paper.
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, in Spain, almost every establishment changed the use of
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 bags and
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 straws to materials made of paper, and for the products made of
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 an extra fund needs to be paid, for in
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 way,
people
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 will prevent using
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. In conclusion, the main problems of
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 pollution are the destruction of the planet and putting wildlife at risk,
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,
this
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 can be addressed by making more
people
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 know about the danger of
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 contamination and using paper products
instead
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 of
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.

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Task Achievement
Expand on the problems caused by plastic waste and provide more specific examples.
Coherence and Cohesion
Provide a stronger conclusion summarizing the main points discussed.
Lexical Resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and more varied sentence structures.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use proper grammar throughout the essay.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • single-use plastics
  • biodegradable
  • aesthetic value
  • urban flooding
  • heat island effect
  • marine life
  • entangled
  • toxic chemicals
  • waste disposal
  • food chain
  • public awareness
  • recycling infrastructure
  • sustainable solutions
  • environmental impact
  • taxes or levies
  • reduced agricultural productivity
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