Some people believe that all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent machines. What is your opinion?
Artificial intelligence is believed to take over most of the
jobs
done by humans in the future. While
most unskilled jobs
will eventually be taken over by robots
, replacing humans in the jobs
that require human contact is unlikely. This
essay will discuss why eventually only a handful of jobs
will be carried out by people.
To begin
with, robots
may replace humans only in specific jobs
where human skills are not required. Many companies are replacing people with artificially intelligent devices which are cost-effective as compared to hiring and training staff to carry out easy tasks. Moreover
, these robots
perform these jobs
with more precision and productively which will eradicate the challenge of human error and the time taken to complete a job. To cite an example, supermarkets have replaced cashiers and stock checkers with bots which cost way less than employees. Furthermore
, these bots can work around the clock and do not need any days off. For these reasons, jobs
that do not require human involvement will be replaced by artificially intelligent robots
.
Conversely
, robots
will not be able to replace jobs
that require a human touch. The human capacity to perform certain jobs
is much more than machines
and robots
will never be able to achieve that capacity. Some examples of these specific tasks are massage, education, health and social work. For example
, machines
can not replace doctors as it is impossible for machines
to carry out an operation. These tasks can be carried out by specialists with high skills and can not be matched by bots.
To conclude
, while
some people agree that human employees will be replaced by machines
, others believe that they will not be able to replace certain skills. In my opinion, artificially intelligent machines
might replace human workers to a large extent, but it is impossible to match the human capacity to perform high-skill jobs
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