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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The given graph shows the percentage of the
population
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 in four Asian
countries
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 (Philippines,
Malaysia
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,
Thailand
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, and
Indonesia
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) residing in urban areas from 1970 to 2020 with projections for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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, it is seen that
Malaysia
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 and
Philipines
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the Philipines
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 had similar percentages of people living in
cities
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 in 1970 as compared to the other two
countries
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Thailand
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 and
Indonesia
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, which began with less than 20% of their
population
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 in
cities
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. As far as their growth is concerned, both
Malaysia
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 and
Indonesia
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 saw a substantial increase in their
population
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 as opposed to the other two
countries
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 which began at the same level. In terms of the two
countries
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 (
Malaysia
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 and Philippines) which began at approximately 30% of their
population
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 in urban areas, it is observed that
while
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 there was a steady
rise
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 in the percentage of
population
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 migrating to
cities
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 in
Malaysia
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 until it reached around 78% in 2020, Philipines saw an initial increase (from 30% to 50% in 1990) which reversed and fell to about 42% in 2010.
However
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, it increased to approximately another percentage point in 2020. Both
countries
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 are expecting to see a
rise
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 in their urban
population
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 in 2030 and 2040, reaching
to
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about 85% in
Malaysia
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 and 55% in
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 respectively.
Whereas
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,
while
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 both
Indonesia
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 and
Thailand
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 had approximately 12% and 18% respectively, of their
population
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 in
cities
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 in 1970,
Indonesia
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 saw
dramatic
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a dramatic
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rise
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 in its urban
population
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 all the way
till
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to
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 2020 reaching
to
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a little over 50%. In
comparison
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,comparison
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 the urban
population
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 rose only to about 30% by 2020.
While
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 the prediction for
Thailand
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 is a meteoric
rise
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 in 2030 and 2040 to reach about 45%, it is more conservative for
Indonesia
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 and it is expected to reach
to
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apply
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about 62% in 2040.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, countries, malaysia, thailand, indonesia, cities, rise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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