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The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of Internet users in three different countries and the world average between 1998 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart describes the comparison of the
quantity
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number
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 of individuals using the
Internet
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 in Greece,
Denmark
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, Canada, and the world average over a period of fifteen years from 1998 to 2013. It can be seen from the graph that the volume of
Internet
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users
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 in three nations and the world average increased steadily over the period shown. It is noticeable that the number of
Internet
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users
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 in Greece and
Denmark
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 was considerably higher compared with other regions. The population using the
Internet
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 in Greece increased steadily from approximately 3
thousand
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 to over 60
thousand
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people
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. In
Denmark
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, the number of
Internet
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users
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 climbed sharply between 1998 and 2003, from 23
thousand
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 to 78
thousand
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people
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,
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 rose slightly from around 78
thousand
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 in 2003 to 95
thousand
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people
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 in 2013. Similar to
Denmark
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, the figure for
people
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 using the
Internet
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 in Canada witnessed a quick rise between 1998 and 2003 from around 27
thousand
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 to 70
thousand
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people
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,
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 jumped slowly between 2003 and 2013 from 70
thousand
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 to 88
thousand
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people
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. During the period from 1998 to 2013, there was a steady growth in the average number of
Internet
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users
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 worldwide, from about 5
thousand
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 to 35
thousand
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people
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, denmark, users, thousand, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Internet penetration
  • Trend
  • Growth rate
  • Increase/decrease
  • Comparative analysis
  • Significant
  • Average
  • Fluctuation
  • Plateau
  • Surge
  • Spike
  • Decline
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