The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table illustrates data about two groups of age, average income per
person
and population
below the poverty
line in three
American states, namely California
, Utah and Florida
.
Overall
, Utah has the highest proportion of people
aged under 18 and the lowest percentage of people
aged over 60 in all three
states. Additionally
, the proportion of the population
living under the poverty
line in California
is higher than in other regions even though it has the highest average income per person
.
People
aged under 18 account for over a quarter of Utal’s population
which is higher than the figures of California
and Florida
, at 17% and 16% respectively. The proportion of citizens aged over 60 in Florida
is 23%, which is 10% more than California
and almost three
times more than Utal.
The average revenue per person
in California
is 23000$, the highest among all three
states. People
living in Florida
earn more than Utal, at 22000$ and 17000$ respectively. Although
residents living in California
had the highest income per person
, California
has the highest rate of the population
living below the poverty
line, which is 16%, nearly two times than the figures of Utal with the lowest rate of 9%. Finally
, the poverty
rate in Florida
is 12%.Submitted by phanhuyhoang278 on
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