The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given illustration represents the
cycle
of the huge Use synonyms
fish
named Use synonyms
salmon
and the Use synonyms
cycle
of being an adult.
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Overall
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this
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cycle
requires only 3 steps, and Use synonyms
fish
grow in three different locations Use synonyms
such
as the upper river where they will grow and adapt Linking Words
then
to the lower river where the flow is the fact in the end Linking Words
fish
will go to the open sea.
It can be clearly seen that the first Use synonyms
stage
is becoming Use synonyms
fish
from the egg. Use synonyms
Salmon
eggs grow in the upper river where the moving is so low, Use synonyms
moreover
, they grow under reeds, and near small stones, and after approximately 5-6 months they will fry. Usually, the fry’s length starts from 3 and might be up to 8 cm.
In the next Linking Words
stage
, the Use synonyms
fish
will move to the middle water. There Use synonyms
fish
grow until about 4 years. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, they will called smolt, and they can be from 12 to 15 centimetres.
The Linking Words
last
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stage
of the Use synonyms
cycle
is becoming big Use synonyms
salmon
from smolt. In Use synonyms
this
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stage
, Use synonyms
salmon
will change the location for a bigger, more accurate open sea. After 5 years until the end of life, they will grow there, Use synonyms
furthermore
, big Linking Words
salmon
might be from 70 to 76 cm in length.Use synonyms
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